QUOTE (image66 @ Mar 15 2007, 10:25 AM)
Not really. To me, the picture is lacking something. The composition is non-standard and mis-balanced. It reminds me of the "floating heads" senior portraits that were popular several years ago. Unless there is a greater meaning to the picture, it falls down under the weight of its unusual composition.
I looked at the image again and really studied it. I tried to find something to it that spoke to me or in any way connected. The only thing that I got out of it was the technical execution of the lighting.
The model is pretty, and the expression is neutral. But with the one eye darkened out, it's not easy to connect with her either. I wanted to look into her eyes, but wasn't able to.
Thank you Razvan for posting your image. I concur with image 66 on this one. I too was looking further for something other than - 'beautiful woman with holographic barn'. There just didn't seem to be any other narrative and if it weren't for the specific request in this post for some comments, I would not have spent much time giving it further consideration.
Razvan, I think that a few more elements need to be included when you are trying to make an 'art' image and in this instance, as mentioned above, the eyes are all important. In film and theatre every micro movement of every facial muscle conveys something, and this woman's expression to me is conveying - sweet innocence - which just doesn't seem to fit the dark layered barnyard effect.
Compositionally it feels a bit cumbersome.
If you want to make it 'arty', you could try to give us more of the story and layer in some more items to help with the narrative. You could also get her to look toward the viewer and speak with her eyes.
Sometimes the 'less pretty model' creates a stronger more interesting, arresting image. I think we are saturated with 'beautiful people' in advertising, music, tv, videos. It is often the gnarled characters of our species who intrigue us the most.
Julie