button
Jul 5 2009, 12:39 PM
We've discussed the nuts and bolts of the critique process here:
http://luminous-landscape.com/forum/index....showtopic=35359Given how well that discussion went, I thought we might all benefit from a discussion of the nature of critique and what exactly it does for us as (dare I say it) artists. I would really appreciate your comments on this topic, because I think it deserves some consideration. I'll start with my observations:
On the surface, the two questions in the topic title seem easy to answer. For example, "When we allow others to critique our work, the feedback we get helps shape our next photographic endeavors." "We post here because we want to improve." "We offer critique to help others improve."
Simple, right? Well, maybe. However, I'd like to think these questions can serve as a chrysalis for much more meaningful dialogue, perhaps in the form of more questions, like "When do I know when to take someone's critique to heart?" "How much thought should I give another person's work before I comment?" "Can I articulate how critique has specifically helped me grow as a photographer?"
Please give this some thought and post your reply, because I don't see how it can do anything but help everyone.
Thanks,
John
Christian Miersch
Jul 5 2009, 01:12 PM
John, I have the feeling something specific is disturbing you, but you are talking your way around it. If there indeed is something more, I encourage you to say it direct. Then you might get direct answers. Concerning how to critique, I will cite a faq from
CGTalk, wich pretty much nails it. (I belong to the hobbyists and must confess I have difficulties for myself sounding not too negative with my critique.) Anyhow, here it goes:
The Artist ...- upon presenting a work to the gallery should expect to have his/her work critiqued by others of varying skill levels.
- professionals - someone who has worked at some capacity in the film, television or gaming industry.
- students - someone who is currently enrolled in academic classes relating to the Digital Arts profession.
- hobbiests - someone who has a strong interest in the field and utilizes their free time pursuing their own personal projects in the medium.
- admirers - someone who just has a strong interest in the artists, their work and the media but doesn't have any experience producing the art themselves.
- John & Jane Does - someone who has randomly stumbled upon the forum and has registered to leave a comment or two.
- should understand that the opinion and critique of each individual mentioned above should be considered of equal value. It does not take a qualified and trained Master Chef to understand when cheese has gone bad. The same principle applies to anyone who wishes to critique an image.
- is not under any requirement to alter their work as suggested by it's critics.
- Apply all critiques - improve your work or muddle it up with the collective opinions of the masses. That is your choice.
- Apply some - maybe you understand the relevance of some critiques but don't want to sacrifice in other areas. That's fine.
- Apply none - Yes, you do have the right to ignore all critique provided or dismiss them as irrelevant to your vision. However, don't be surprised when your critics question your motivation to post in this WIP forum.
- should be courteous and thankful to the critiques provided, acknowledging each critique as helpful (even should the artist choose to ignore the advice provided). Someone just spent 2 minutes or longer writing an opinion of your work. Return the favor by (at the very least) thanking them for their time.
- should not take any critique of the art presented as a personal attack on his/her own character. Please understand that, "this is incorrect" and "you're a douchebag" are two completely different statements. The first being completely acceptable behaviour on the forum, and the later should be immediately reported to one of the Forum Leaders.
The Critic ...- should understand that their opinion (regardless of how they or others may feel is relevant to the work) is never the final word of absolute truth and knowledge. That privilege belongs to the artist. The artist ultimately knows his/her vision and path that they wish to take to get there.
- may not agree with the artist's decisions or methods, but it is not acceptable to impose yourself upon the work. The correct way to critique work is to offer suggestions that the artist may (or may not) choose to implement in their revisions.
- should remain mindful that artists can be egotists (not trying to stereotype here, but it's a pretty common unwritten fact ). Careful choice of words when providing a critique is often recommended.
- Provide specifics when possible.
- Avoid use of negative words like bad, horrible, wrong, stupid, etc.
- Mention the parts that you like about the image as well as the parts you don't.
- should not argue the opinions or critiques provided by other users. Focus on the artwork presented and allow other users to give their opinion as well (even if you disagree).
shutterpup
Jul 5 2009, 03:02 PM
Christian,
I like your list coming from both the artist's view and the critic's view. I especially like the last statement saying that different posters should not make an OP's topic a battleground of words which can turn nasty. There is always room for respectful discussion of any suggestions/critiques made. I think we all need to heed this last statement so that this can continue to be a worthwhile experience both for the photographer who offers up a photo and the one offering a critique.
Rob C
Jul 5 2009, 03:43 PM
Christian, either I have had too much agua con gas tonight or the tomatoes in the salad were off, but one way or the other, that list of do/do not do was a send-up, wasnīt it?
Rob C
button
Jul 5 2009, 04:26 PM
QUOTE (Christian Miersch @ Jul 5 2009, 01:12 PM)

John, I have the feeling something specific is disturbing you, but you are talking your way around it. If there indeed is something more, I encourage you to say it direct.
Nothing's disturbing me at all. I am simply interested in the way by which critique improves us. Since critique is an unscientific process and helps us get better, I had hoped that by posting this thread we could solve some of what I see as mystery involved. I not only realize that everyone has their own style and set of aesthetic values, I count on that fact when I receive critique. I promise you, there's no passive aggression built into my original post!
John
Edit reason: grammatical error
Jeremy Payne
Jul 5 2009, 05:19 PM
>>> "The Artist ... should understand that the opinion and critique of each individual mentioned above should be considered of equal value."
Sorry ... no way. This is not nursery school or a Marxist day camp. All opinions/critiques/critics are absolutely not "equal" or of "equal value" ...
Christian Miersch
Jul 5 2009, 05:35 PM
Shutterpup, what you say. And I like it too that its about both sides.
Rob, I dont get why anyone would think this is a send-up.
John, ok I see! (As I read your post I thought you meant the recent two threads where Dale Russ and Jeremy where ...arguing. In any case, my question was superfluous.)
All the best!
Christian
feppe
Jul 5 2009, 05:54 PM
TOP made a
post which encapsulates how I think about the subject perfectly.
QUOTE (Jeremy Payne @ Jul 5 2009, 06:19 PM)

>>> "The Artist ... should understand that the opinion and critique of each individual mentioned above should be considered of equal value."
Sorry ... no way. This is not nursery school or a Marxist day camp. All opinions/critiques/critics are absolutely not "equal" or of "equal value" ...
While I agree with your sentiment 100%, I think (hope) the point of the statement was that the photographer
can learn equally well from the critique of Joe Blow as well as Respected Art Scholar - it will be very different learning, though.
QUOTE (Jeremy Payne @ Jul 5 2009, 06:19 PM)

>>> "The Artist ... should understand that the opinion and critique of each individual mentioned above should be considered of equal value."
Sorry ... no way. This is not nursery school or a Marxist day camp. All opinions/critiques/critics are absolutely not "equal" or of "equal value" ...
I agree with Jeremy on this. I've said it before, and I'll say it again: People who are going to offer photographic criticism here need to make at least a cross-section of their own work available for inspection. That's the only way I know to judge the value of their criticism. Anyone can claim any kind of background he wants to claim and there's no way to check it out unless the claim is so outrageous that the contrary is a matter of record. But there's one neat thing about photography: you can't fake it. The result speaks for itself. If it doesn't, it's a failure. I'm not sure the same thing's true of painting, considering some of the put-ons that have been shopped successfully in the fine art community.
I also don't agree with "..should not argue the opinions or critiques provided by other users. Focus on the artwork presented and allow other users to give their opinion as well (even if you disagree)." You certainly should allow others to give their opinions, but if an opinion is flat wrong it would be a mistake not to point out the error. On the other hand, arguing on the merits doesn't include ad hominem attacks. Also on the other hand, there can be opinions with which you may not agree, but which are simply different opinions from your own and not egregious errors.
I really like the increase I've seen lately in constructive criticism on here. I see a lot less reluctance to criticize and I see a lot more willingness to accept honest criticism without feeling it's insulting.
Christian Miersch
Jul 5 2009, 06:13 PM
Small example, a leading german 3D company I know considered their nightshift cleaning womans one of their most valuable critics. They said, when you work 24/7 on some stuff, you sometimes are so drawn in that you overlook the obvious. These cleaning woman where just honest and would point it out directly.
I have some friends like that too, they dont understand anything from photos and graphic, but I value their opinions very much, its just raw and direct.
Either a critique makes sense for the artist, or not. For me its anyway who issues it, be it Karl Marx or Frodo Beutlin IVX. Simple like that.
Jeremy Payne
Jul 5 2009, 06:46 PM
QUOTE (Christian Miersch @ Jul 5 2009, 07:13 PM)

considered their nightshift cleaning womans one of their most valuable critics.
I hope they pay her for that work if they find it so valuable.
Does that mean that the opinions of ALL night cleaning women are "equal"?
Maybe you meant it is
possible to get good criticism from anyone, not that all critics and criticism are "equal"?
button
Jul 5 2009, 06:48 PM
QUOTE (RSL @ Jul 5 2009, 06:00 PM)

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: People who are going to offer photographic criticism here need to make at least a cross-section of their own work available for inspection... there's one neat thing about photography: you can't fake it.
I think you make a great point here, Russ. Unfortunately for those like myself who don't have a large body of nature/landscape work, this barometer devalues our opinion (not that I take that personally

). I have to rely upon consistent photographic results of my suggestions to validate my responses here.
John
QUOTE (button @ Jul 5 2009, 07:48 PM)

I think you make a great point here, Russ. Unfortunately for those like myself who don't have a large body of nature/landscape work, this barometer devalues our opinion (not that I take that personally

). I have to rely upon consistent photographic results of my suggestions to validate my responses here.
John
John, I haven't a large body of landscape or nature work either. In fact, I hardly have a body in those areas at all, since people, their works, and their artifacts are my main concern. I'm not sure how that makes a difference. To me the important thing is whether or not you can see, can compose, and are technically competent in whatever genre you happen to explore. Seems to me a photographer who's serious about his work should be able to draw conclusions about the quality of work in areas other than his chosen ones.
JeffKohn
Jul 5 2009, 10:50 PM
QUOTE
I agree with Jeremy on this. I've said it before, and I'll say it again: People who are going to offer photographic criticism here need to make at least a cross-section of their own work available for inspection. That's the only way I know to judge the value of their criticism. Anyone can claim any kind of background he wants to claim and there's no way to check it out unless the claim is so outrageous that the contrary is a matter of record. But there's one neat thing about photography: you can't fake it. The result speaks for itself. If it doesn't, it's a failure. I'm not sure the same thing's true of painting, considering some of the put-ons that have been shopped successfully in the fine art community.
I'm not so sure that this matters all that much to me. It can be useful to look at someone's work and get an idea of where they're coming from, but for the most part I'm going to judge the value of their critiques based on the insight and thought that went into them. And I don't necessarily think you have to be a good photographer to be a good critic. Certainly with other art forms, it seems to rarely be the case that well-respected critics are also accomplished practitioners. Non-photographers, or even photographers that work exclusively in other genres, will likely approach an image from a different viewpoint than another photographer who has been shooting the same stuff for years. Both types of feedback can be helpful.
So while it may be useful (or just interesting) to see commenters' work, I certainly wouldn't want people to feel afraid to offer their opinions here because they don't feel the have the resume/credentials to back them up. If people just lurk because they're afraid to post and make themselves look/feel stupid, that's counter-productive to the forum.
QUOTE
I really like the increase I've seen lately in constructive criticism on here. I see a lot less reluctance to criticize and I see a lot more willingness to accept honest criticism without feeling it's insulting.
I definitely agree. It's good to see the increased activity in this forum, and the postings have mostly been of high quality.
byork
Jul 6 2009, 12:37 AM
QUOTE (button @ Jul 5 2009, 06:39 PM)

1. "When do I know when to take someone's critique to heart?"
2."How much thought should I give another person's work before I comment?"
John,
Question 1. When the response becomes sarcastic and is aimed at belittling the person posting the work. Thankfully, apart from a few instances this is rare on this forum, and I have found most criticism to be constructive and helpful (including several comments of yours John, on some of my own offerings).
Question 2. If someone is going to attempt to offer suggestions on how an image could be improved, probably a fair bit of thought would be appreciated...as in "engage brain before opening mouth" (or keyboard in this case). If the intent is merely to express whether the image "speaks to one" or has some sort of "wow factor", then first impressions would suffice. The second instance would probably apply more to "cleaning ladies" or other untrained photographic points of view....however, I do think that the reactions of these sort of people is a very good indication of how striking an image is, or isn't!
On the "equal value" debate....
no they are not!!! I have refrained from commenting on a lot of the work posted here because, quite frankly, there are plenty of people here who are much more qualified than myself that would give better advice. I would hate to give someone a "bum steer" to use the Australian vernacular. In the interests of giving something back to a forum that has helped me out immensely, I have commented where I have felt strongly enough to do so....but it seems bizarre to me to critique work by Russ (whose opinion I have come to greatly respect), and others with years more experience in the field of photography.
Cheers
Brian
stamper
Jul 6 2009, 02:07 AM
QUOTE (Jeremy Payne @ Jul 5 2009, 06:19 PM)

>>> "The Artist ... should understand that the opinion and critique of each individual mentioned above should be considered of equal value."
Sorry ... no way. This is not nursery school or a Marxist day camp. All opinions/critiques/critics are absolutely not "equal" or of "equal value" ...
What makes you think that your opinion is better than mine or someone elses?
Expressing an honest opinion on anything is fraught with danger, whether it's art, photography or one's spouse's new hair style.
It's fairly obvious that 'little white lies", and sometimes 'very big ones', are essential for our society to work smoothly, including photographic criticism on this site and many others.
I sometimes like to fantasize about a world where everyone spoke his/her true thoughts. What would happen? Would we descend into chaos and anarchy?
Perhaps the answer rests on the word 'true'. Do we know what our true thoughts are? Or do most of us just spout second hand opinions we've read about, been exposed to and accept for status reasons and think are cool?
kaelaria
Jul 6 2009, 03:47 AM
QUOTE (button @ Jul 5 2009, 01:39 PM)

We've discussed the nuts and bolts of the critique process here:
http://luminous-landscape.com/forum/index....showtopic=35359Given how well that discussion went, I thought we might all benefit from a discussion of the nature of critique and what exactly it does for us as (dare I say it) artists. I would really appreciate your comments on this topic, because I think it deserves some consideration. I'll start with my observations:
On the surface, the two questions in the topic title seem easy to answer. For example, "When we allow others to critique our work, the feedback we get helps shape our next photographic endeavors." "We post here because we want to improve." "We offer critique to help others improve."
Simple, right? Well, maybe. However, I'd like to think these questions can serve as a chrysalis for much more meaningful dialogue, perhaps in the form of more questions, like "When do I know when to take someone's critique to heart?" "How much thought should I give another person's work before I comment?" "Can I articulate how critique has specifically helped me grow as a photographer?"
Please give this some thought and post your reply, because I don't see how it can do anything but help everyone.
Thanks,
John
BOY do you think too much.
Jeremy Payne
Jul 6 2009, 06:28 AM
QUOTE (stamper @ Jul 6 2009, 03:07 AM)

What makes you think that your opinion is better than mine or someone elses?
Um ... where do you get that? I said no such thing. Not even close.
stamper
Jul 6 2009, 07:15 AM
QUOTE (Jeremy Payne @ Jul 6 2009, 06:28 AM)

Um ... where do you get that? I said no such thing. Not even close.
Post 6 listed above
Quote
Sorry ... no way. This is not nursery school or a Marxist day camp. All opinions/critiques/critics are absolutely not "equal" or of "equal value" ...
Unquote
It appears to me that you consider your opinions to be better than others or should be given more than equal value? Nobody knows the "credentials" of the posters giving their opinions, except for a certain few? Michael, Schewe etc? Therefore the vast majority of posters should have an equal say when replying? There isn't a ranking order on the discussion forum? Sorry your post sounded a bit "superior" to me?
Jeremy Payne
Jul 6 2009, 07:44 AM
QUOTE (stamper @ Jul 6 2009, 08:15 AM)

It appears to me that you consider your opinions to be better than others or should be given more than equal value? Nobody knows the "credentials" of the posters giving their opinions, except for a certain few? Michael, Schewe etc? Therefore the vast majority of posters should have an equal say when replying? There isn't a ranking order on the discussion forum? Sorry your post sounded a bit "superior" to me?
Read it again ... Not once did I ever say anything about the value of my opinion relative to others'. Nowhere do I discuss how we uncover that inequality or on what basis that inequality rests. Nowhere at all do I mention myself. All I said was "all opinions ... are not equal". Is that so hard to digest or really all that controversial?
Let's try again with a slightly different, but functionally equivalent example:
Someone says: "All coffee makers are the same!"
I say: "No they aren't, all coffee makers are definitely not same ... some are better than others."
You say: "What makes you think your coffee maker is better than mine?"
See what I'm sayin'?
button
Jul 6 2009, 09:10 AM
QUOTE (kaelaria @ Jul 6 2009, 03:47 AM)

BOY do you think too much.
I can live with that.
DarkPenguin
Jul 6 2009, 09:26 AM
QUOTE (Jeremy Payne @ Jul 6 2009, 07:44 AM)

Read it again ... Not once did I ever say anything about the value of my opinion relative to others'. Nowhere do I discuss how we uncover that inequality or on what basis that inequality rests. Nowhere at all do I mention myself. All I said was "all opinions ... are not equal". Is that so hard to digest or really all that controversial?
Let's try again with a slightly different, but functionally equivalent example:
Someone says: "All coffee makers are the same!"
I say: "No they aren't, all coffee makers are definitely not same ... some are better than others."
You say: "What makes you think your coffee maker is better than mine?"
See what I'm sayin'?
Why are you hating on my coffee maker?
Jeremy Payne
Jul 6 2009, 09:30 AM
QUOTE (DarkPenguin @ Jul 6 2009, 10:26 AM)

Why are you hating on my coffee maker?
'Cause you shoot Canon and I shoot Nikon ... wasn't that obvious from my first post? If not, I'm sorry I wasn't more clear ...
dalethorn
Jul 6 2009, 11:52 AM
This topic seems to be a call for creating a social hierarchy within the existing social group. The software that runs the forum already supports a 1-5 star ranking for members. If those stars (or a 1-5 digit) could be displayed next to the name with each post, that would accomplish the task, yes? Then of course, interested persons with multiple 'nyms could trash rankings of members who haven't been ranked by hundreds of other members already (read: nearly everyone could be trashed.) But maybe some other standard could be applied, based on informal membership in The Clique. Haven't heard of The Clique? Films such as Lords Of Discipline, The Firm, Star Chamber and others illustrate how control-centric persons bond together to accomplish their purposes.
What works for most control-centric persons on forums like this is the old time-honored practice of bullying. It can be subtle, skillful, blatant, clever, or even scientific, but it's still the same thing: Keep the "unapproved" people from participating, and/or marginalize them any way possible.
But wait - there may be a way to do this after all. Read the number of posts next to the poster's name. That's a good indication of longevity, personal interest, commitment - in short, they've been here and participated to that extent already. And whatever info is available on their member profile page can be taken with a large grain of salt. And of course, for those persons who like reason and logic, they can always fall back on the best data of all - what the poster actually said.
QUOTE (JeffKohn @ Jul 5 2009, 10:50 PM)

I'm not so sure that this matters all that much to me. It can be useful to look at someone's work and get an idea of where they're coming from, but for the most part I'm going to judge the value of their critiques based on the insight and thought that went into them. And I don't necessarily think you have to be a good photographer to be a good critic. Certainly with other art forms, it seems to rarely be the case that well-respected critics are also accomplished practitioners. Non-photographers, or even photographers that work exclusively in other genres, will likely approach an image from a different viewpoint than another photographer who has been shooting the same stuff for years. Both types of feedback can be helpful.
So while it may be useful (or just interesting) to see commenters' work, I certainly wouldn't want people to feel afraid to offer their opinions here because they don't feel the have the resume/credentials to back them up. If people just lurk because they're afraid to post and make themselves look/feel stupid, that's counter-productive to the forum.
I definitely agree. It's good to see the increased activity in this forum, and the postings have mostly been of high quality.
Jeff,
One thing I didn't point out in that post, though I did in an earlier one, is that it's up to the person who posted a picture for criticism to determine the value of the criticism he receives.
How to determine that value also is up to the poster.
Now, there are plenty of posters who will instantly agree with a "criticism" that says, "I really like that! Attaboy!", but few who will hasten to agree with a criticism that says, "It's a reasonably good shot, but..." Yet, the second criticism may be much more to the point and may contain a lot more useful information than the first. If I receive the second kind of criticism, the first thing I want to know is how useful the critic's suggestions are liable to be. How do I determine that? Well, if he's posted his background in his profile, that can give me at least a clue, but very few people on here have given any information about themselves in their profile, and even if there's extensive information in the profile, how do I know whether or not the member has.., well, overstated the case? But there's one thing I can rely on. If the critic is a photographer, I want to see his photographs. That's going to tell me a lot more than anything he can write about his qualifications.
By the way, the fact that in other art forms "well-respected" critics rarely are accomplished practitioners goes a long way toward explaining the descent of modern painting and modern poetry into the pit of unintelligibility. In art there are no assigned "credentials" that mean anything. Your works
are your credentials.
dalethorn
Jul 6 2009, 02:23 PM
QUOTE (RSL @ Jul 6 2009, 11:57 AM)

Your works are your credentials.
Not necessarily. By analogy, if I had to depend on my parents' examples and so-called credentials for my upbringing, I would have missed a lot of important points. Many times it's what they *said* (do or don't do and here's why) that made the difference for their children between success and failure. Someone else's credentials don't buy you anything - the factual information they give you *may* help.
Christian Miersch
Jul 6 2009, 03:41 PM
I feel bad when I read all this. I feel some of you are fundamentally misinterpreting **exactly the critical parts** of what I posted. It seems to me like some of you are drawing absurd conclusions to abadon the whole text. These rules, read right (wich is really trivial), are fundamental to a large group of artistic communities, and they are ensuring honest verbatim critique and a respectful together. I can tell that from experience. I must say I am a bit shocked this was so largely rejected, even commented with some agression, at least I experience it as such. I wont explain it further, really its not too hard so grasp, if someone cant grasp it, it his or her problem. Now ok! I cant change that! Maybe its really the pro/amateur ratio wich ultimatively decides over the climate in a community. After all, there at CGTalk are mainly artists, and nobody can change the rules wich originate from target group ratios. I want to blame no one. But I say, the more we could apply these rules, the better.
And just one thing. I personally dont need ANYONE warning me about what other persons supposedly are doing wrong. I find this to be very childish behaviour. I have my own brain, Im an adult, I am able to judge for myself. I cant respect someone who tries to push me to a conclusion.
I want to come to my own conclusions. I might not pick up something instantly when it is said to me, I might even reject it in the first place! But the things which are really true - for me - are staying in my head and are developing over time, regardless if sayed once, or if sayed 10 times. And I am sure this is true for every person on this planet. I respect people wich are just stating their opinion and let let me figure the rest.
Also, when I dont like an opinion, if I feel its really wrong, I have the choice either to go personal, to really accuse, expose and humiliate with my very best techniques, along with my arguments. That will bring a foreseeable result. Or instead, I could as well just state my opionion, wich might differ. If I do that politely the other might be pissed off too! But then its really his problem. The recipient ultimatively decides and picks up the opinion, or mixes of opinions, which suits him or her best, and NOT because I have successfully humiliated this other guy with the "wrong" opinion.
And having said all this, I can live with disagreement. If someone should laugh about my opinion, well of course I wouldnt like that, but I certainly respect that your opinion differs!
So, all the best, to all of you. (And excuse me for my bad english!)
Christian
JeffKohn
Jul 6 2009, 04:09 PM
QUOTE (RSL @ Jul 6 2009, 01:57 PM)

One thing I didn't point out in that post, though I did in an earlier one, is that it's up to the person who posted a picture for criticism to determine the value of the criticism he receives. How to determine that value also is up to the poster.
Now, there are plenty of posters who will instantly agree with a "criticism" that says, "I really like that! Attaboy!", but few who will hasten to agree with a criticism that says, "It's a reasonably good shot, but..." Yet, the second criticism may be much more to the point and may contain a lot more useful information than the first. If I receive the second kind of criticism, the first thing I want to know is how useful the critic's suggestions are liable to be. How do I determine that? Well, if he's posted his background in his profile, that can give me at least a clue, but very few people on here have given any information about themselves in their profile, and even if there's extensive information in the profile, how do I know whether or not the member has.., well, overstated the case? But there's one thing I can rely on. If the critic is a photographer, I want to see his photographs. That's going to tell me a lot more than anything he can write about his qualifications.
We may not be so far apart in our opinions, I think it's just a matter of how much weight would be placed on a critic's portfolio as opposed to other factors. For me it might be a point of interest, and maybe help me understand where a critic is coming from, but I wouldn't completely dismiss a critic's comments due to the lack of a publicly-available portfolio (although if they _do_ have a portfolio and I think their work is garbage, that may be something to consider...

).
I just wouldn't want someone to interpret your earlier post as saying "Only established photographers need apply. If you don't have a portfolio you shouldn't be critiquing". I'm reasonably sure that's not what you meant, but could also see some people reading between the lines and maybe interpreting it that way.
JeffKohn
Jul 6 2009, 04:19 PM
Christian,
I understood the guidelines you posted to have more to do with setting the tone for civil discussion in what can sometimes be an impersonal medium, and I don't see a problem with having some guidelines for that.
Posting an opinion that is contrary to that of another critic is fine; but directly addressing the other critic's comment, calling them 'wrong' or starting an argument is poor form IMHO. What it basically comes down to for me, is that stating an opinion is fine, while starting an argument is not. If you want to argue with somebody do it in private messages or at least start a new thread.
Likewise, all critiques deserve to be responded to with equal respect and civility, even if the photographer may not choose to value them all equally. Responding to a critique by saying "Sorry Billy-Bob, but you're just a newbie so I don't care what you think" would very rude; even if that's how you feel you should keep it to yourself.
Christian Miersch
Jul 6 2009, 04:52 PM
QUOTE (JeffKohn @ Jul 6 2009, 11:19 PM)

Christian,
I understood the guidelines you posted to have more to do with setting the tone for civil discussion in what can sometimes be an impersonal medium, and I don't see a problem with having some guidelines for that.
Posting an opinion that is contrary to that of another critic is fine; but directly addressing the other critic's comment, calling them 'wrong' or starting an argument is poor form IMHO. What it basically comes down to for me, is that stating an opinion is fine, while starting an argument is not. If you want to argue with somebody do it in private messages or at least start a new thread.
Likewise, all critiques deserve to be responded to with equal respect and civility, even if the photographer may not choose to value them all equally. Responding to a critique by saying "Sorry Billy-Bob, but you're just a newbie so I don't care what you think" would very rude; even if that's how you feel you should keep it to yourself.
Jeff,
thank you for answering, I think you summarized it very good.
I dont want to stress the audience, but I want to add one last thing.
I have seen discussions in 3d mailing lists, before web-forums existed. These where other times, but also then there where of course wildly different opinions. But somehow it was different compared to here. The graphics posted where radically turned inside out, to every small bit, covering many aspects. This was always done respectfully, and if some youngsters went arrogant, they where reminded, sometimes also quite direct, by the more experienced people. There always existed different positions, and there where also corrections and disagreements, but that was normal, and contained in the process.
The most beautiful moments I remember where, when in some topics, in certain discussions, sometimes, (after wild discussions!), it eventually became clear that every spoken opinion, different as they seemed had their own merit, and at the end fitted eventually in a big picture, wich contained them all, and wich could not have been formed by a single person.
But enuff said, now Im back to my images.
jule
Jul 6 2009, 05:38 PM
QUOTE (button @ Jul 6 2009, 03:39 AM)

We've discussed the nuts and bolts of the critique process here:
http://luminous-landscape.com/forum/index....showtopic=35359Given how well that discussion went, I thought we might all benefit from a discussion of the nature of critique and what exactly it does for us as (dare I say it) artists. I would really appreciate your comments on this topic, because I think it deserves some consideration. I'll start with my observations:
On the surface, the two questions in the topic title seem easy to answer. For example, "When we allow others to critique our work, the feedback we get helps shape our next photographic endeavors." "We post here because we want to improve." "We offer critique to help others improve."
Simple, right? Well, maybe. However, I'd like to think these questions can serve as a chrysalis for much more meaningful dialogue, perhaps in the form of more questions, like "When do I know when to take someone's critique to heart?" "How much thought should I give another person's work before I comment?" "Can I articulate how critique has specifically helped me grow as a photographer?"
Please give this some thought and post your reply, because I don't see how it can do anything but help everyone.
Thanks,
John
"When do I know when to take someone's critique to heart?"
I think every opinion ultimately assists us to have a clearer vision. Some opinions we immediately reject perhaps because they really feel off base, but perhaps they may be too close to the truth and we refuse to acknowlege them. Regardless, our concequent choices are still shaped by those opinions - we decide not to do what is suggested, and our clarity is developed.
Some opinions we may immediately take on board because they support one's own individual vision (however narrow/broad that may be), or because they have been expressed by a person who has articulated a clear argument or has in the past articulated clear arguments, is in a respected position in the field, or themselves demonstrated some good examples of their own work. When the advice or suggestion is taken on board, clarity is once again established with ones own work.
Which advice to 'take to heart' depends on the maturity of the artist concerned fist and foremost. It is the ability to discern and process information given which ultimately contributes to the development of better/more meaningfull/enjoyable work - whateverr the purpose is for the artist.
Secondly, there is no one set of crtieria which I think can be used to determine the 'value ' of the opinion expressed. Everything is subjective, and we all see things in a different way, regardless of one's credentials.
I think the underlying premise that discussion should be honest, civil and respectful is the basis for the development of one's work is paramount. Only then can opinions be examined and become meaningful.
Now to come back to the 'maturity of the artist'. If someone is for example a 'newbie', then yes, it is difficult to discern which advice to take to heart, but it is about developing that discernment which ultimately develops our maturity with our own vision and practice. I think it is important to try things, or take notice of opinions across all spectrums, and then come back to yourself to reflect and determine which advice has actually worked. This then helps us to refine our practice and ability to discern which advice to take notice of in the future.
This applies even when one is a mature artist, and advice is given left right and centre. The ability to give consideration to others opinions and then discern the best advice will always be a process, and can sometimes be as difficult, because patterns and style are established, and clinging on to those established ways can sometimes limit expansion and developemnt of vision.
I think too often we forget our own responsibilities as artists/photographers/individuals and want a prescription of who has the 'best' advice. This can at best only be arbitrary even with the most discerning guidelines and criteria. Ultimately it is about us learning to be open to listen, experiment, determine ourselves, and develop our own innate ability to decide for ourselves whether the product of our focus satisfies our vision for it.
Julie
Christian Miersch
Jul 6 2009, 06:14 PM
Very beautifully said.
QUOTE (JeffKohn @ Jul 6 2009, 04:09 PM)

I just wouldn't want someone to interpret your earlier post as saying "Only established photographers need apply. If you don't have a portfolio you shouldn't be critiquing". I'm reasonably sure that's not what you meant, but could also see some people reading between the lines and maybe interpreting it that way.
Jeff, You're right. That's not what I meant. Let me state it a different way: If I post a picture that someone criticizes, it may be that the criticism is valid on its face. In other words, the critic may point out something I overlooked. In that case, the critic's status as a critic is meaningless and his criticism obviously is valid. But if the critic brings up something obscure enough that it's not immediately obvious I'd want to know how familiar the critic is with the subject he's addressing. In other words, I'd want to know whether or not he knows what he's talking about. Looking at the critic's portfolio at that point would help me make up my mind. But I'd be stupid to ignore his criticism summarily simply because he doesn't have a portfolio. At that point, unless his suggestion were absurd on its face, I'd probably consider it and maybe try what he's suggesting to see if I agree.
It all comes back to what I said at the beginning. The person posting a picture and receiving a criticism is the one who's going to have to decide whether or not the criticism is valid. No one else can decide that for him. I think Christian said the same thing in a somewhat heated way. Julie also said it in a quite elegant way.
dalethorn
Jul 6 2009, 09:16 PM
QUOTE (RSL @ Jul 6 2009, 06:57 PM)

But if the critic brings up something obscure enough that it's not immediately obvious I'd want to know how familiar the critic is with the subject he's addressing. In other words, I'd want to know whether or not he knows what he's talking about. Looking at the critic's portfolio at that point would help me make up my mind.
The problem here is the portfolio may or may not provide useful info, and can even be wildly misleading. I've seen several examples in the forum where person A assumes person B is completely unqualified to speak authoritatively on a topic, then when they explain why they believe that, person B responds with the information that person A was missing when they made their erroneous judgement. This shouldn't have to happen, but does because some people make assumptions they shouldn't.
In all my time here, I've looked at one or two people's profiles, and neither time had anything to do with their qualifications or credentials. I consider those to be social networking look-sees rather than valid research. If I really felt I had to know more about someone's qualifications, I'd email or message them personally, and more importantly, research them through the Internet.
byork
Jul 7 2009, 12:01 AM
QUOTE (dalethorn @ Jul 7 2009, 03:16 AM)

I've seen several examples in the forum where person A assumes person B is completely unqualified to speak authoritatively on a topic, then when they explain why they believe that, person B responds with the information that person A was missing when they made their erroneous judgement. This shouldn't have to happen, but does because some people make assumptions they shouldn't.
That's a fair enough point.
oldcsar
Jul 7 2009, 01:40 AM
QUOTE (dalethorn @ Jul 6 2009, 10:16 PM)

The problem here is the portfolio may or may not provide useful info, and can even be wildly misleading. I've seen several examples in the forum where person A assumes person B is completely unqualified to speak authoritatively on a topic, then when they explain why they believe that, person B responds with the information that person A was missing when they made their erroneous judgement. This shouldn't have to happen, but does because some people make assumptions they shouldn't.
Yes, I have seen such examples here and elsewhere. But, I think that this is a case which does not necessarily discredit the value of forum users offering up online galleries of their work. The problem of Person A and B that you have presented addresses the error of making hasty judgments, but hasty judgments on another's claim are sometimes made even when there are no credentials (photos) offered, or when a person offers credentials and the other person does not bother to look at them. But I do think you're making a valid point about human stupidity, and online forums would benefit if people practiced a little restraint before making quick assumptions based upon their own ego or upon limited information at hand.
If a forum user claims that submitted landscape photo 'x' has a poor composition, and that it would be better if object 'y' was not so close to the border, it is useful if the forum user has publicly available photos which demonstrate strong composition, etc. It might not even matter if they are people shots, or still life shots- if the forum user has shots which demonstrate good composition skills, it is reasonable that this information would make a forum user's critique more persuasive. If a forum user does not offer some sort of credentials, this certainly doesn't give them that particular chance for persuasion- but that does not necessarily mean that the critique is off the mark. In my opinion, a critique is successful if someone is won over by the critic's argument, hopefully the person who has submitted the photo. If the critique helps someone improve their own work, and the critic's own credentials helped 'win over' the submitter to that end, then credentials are one of the useful tools for "measuring" critiques.
QUOTE
I consider those to be social networking look-sees rather than valid research. If I really felt I had to know more about someone's qualifications, I'd email or message them personally, and more importantly, research them through the Internet.
That's entirely reasonable. I enjoy looking at the galleries that other forum users offer up on their profiles, more often than not I've been impressed with the talent of the users around here.
stamper
Jul 7 2009, 03:42 AM
Does the forum posters think that a system of giving points out of ten along with their comments a good thing? It happens in camera clubs. If a poster gives a negative comment about an image they could also "redeem" themselves with a "never the less an 8 out of ten" score or something similar? There isn't such a thing as a perfect image and fault can always be found? I have seen very good images "spoilt" by something that couldn't be avoided but shouldn't detract overall from an excellent image.
Christian Miersch
Jul 7 2009, 03:44 AM
>>"... it may be that the citicism is valid on its face ..."
The text I posted quitely assumes in large parts that the issued critiques more or less makes sense.
QUOTE (RSL @ Jul 7 2009, 03:57 AM)

Jeff, You're right. That's not what I meant. Let me state it a different way: If I post a picture that someone criticizes, it may be that the criticism is valid on its face. In other words, the critic may point out something I overlooked. In that case, the critic's status as a critic is meaningless and his criticism obviously is valid. But if the critic brings up something obscure enough that it's not immediately obvious I'd want to know how familiar the critic is with the subject he's addressing. In other words, I'd want to know whether or not he knows what he's talking about. Looking at the critic's portfolio at that point would help me make up my mind. But I'd be stupid to ignore his criticism summarily simply because he doesn't have a portfolio. At that point, unless his suggestion were absurd on its face, I'd probably consider it and maybe try what he's suggesting to see if I agree.
It all comes back to what I said at the beginning. The person posting a picture and receiving a criticism is the one who's going to have to decide whether or not the criticism is valid. No one else can decide that for him. I think Christian said the same thing in a somewhat heated way. Julie also said it in a quite elegant way.
Russ,
now I feel I am at a point where I can talk. I agree in some parts with you, and in some not. Lets start.
Im not so sure about the general necessarity of that background thing. I say, a sentence clearly can always be dealt with regardless of its origin.
Of course if someone has a site or not, and the quality of his works tells volumes. And of course I might dismiss the point of a text without a background. But then, is this my problem? I think, no. Instead it is the problem of the guy making his statement. He is in responsibility to make his assertion as foolproof as possible. Its not me being responsibe finding out about someone. And even then a background is only useful so much. For example, maybe someone makes brilliant art, but still he might talk rubbish. Or, someone says something I dont like, maybe a background INDEED helps me to understand him, but I STILL might not like it. What now? And in a talk face to face I also cannot interrupt it to make research about the other person. Ok, I might ask.
So while wanting to know a background can be perfectly reasonable at any point, it is not a requirement for anything. The one who makes an argument is instead responsible to invest some care and let his statement stand on its own. If not he runs into the risk being misunderstood. And of course I am challenged to assume good faith also in an ambiguous statements.
And that leads me to the next point, and Im sure we agree here: Of course, if I feel someone has indeed stated something very funny, its only fair to point it out, or to ask about a qualification to be able to make sense of an information, no question about that. When something doesnt make sense, it should be pointed out direct and in all honesty, but at the same time civilised and with respect. And of course then I should expect that I will be questioned the same way, and that should I have dismissed something, it will be pointed out as well, be it only the slightest point.
The problem with this I see here in this subforum (I only want to talk about HERE), that these type of discussions arent really happening. Instead they are quickly escalating, turning into weird shows where everybody seems to misunderstand each other and cant give an inch of his territory finally leading to some types of, I hate to say it, public humiliation. The arguments often heated right from the start, and I have rarely seen someone just acknowledging someone other is right.
I must confess I dont know how to solve that. I can only say generally: If I issue critique, I should also expect to swallow some, fair is fair. I have to be open to critique if I frequently critique other people or I loose credibility. I should be always open to compromises and never totally set on an issue. And if I see someone doesnt agree in the long term, its better to leave the person alone, to respect that. I have to respect everybody as he is. Ultimately, I cant change anybody, and I also can easily confess I have my problems with some of the issues too. No one is better than anyone regarding this I guess.
All the best
Christian
Christian Miersch
Jul 7 2009, 04:23 AM
Russ,
I want to say one more thing because it doesnt make much sense to talk around it and I feel its the right moment. First, you are a knowledgeable guy with a big background in photography, and I have gotten great advice from you. But sometimes I experience you a bit as if in fear giving in or loosing territory, insisting. This in my eyes influences how you are viewed and partly depreciates your otherwise very good, spot on and extensive advice. And Im mentioning because your voice here is important to the public.
(Oh well I should not have written it, now Im in fear getting my comment too!!!

)
Nevermind!
Christian
QUOTE (Christian Miersch @ Jul 7 2009, 04:23 AM)

Russ,
I want to say one more thing because it doesnt make much sense to talk around it and I feel its the right moment. First, you are a knowledgeable guy with a big background in photography, and I have gotten great advice from you. But sometimes I experience you a bit as if in fear giving in or loosing territory, insisting. This in my eyes influences how you are viewed and partly depreciates your otherwise very good, spot on and extensive advice. And Im mentioning because your voice here is important to the public.
(Oh well I should not have written it, now Im in fear getting my comment too!!!

)
Nevermind!
Christian
Christian, Your English is excellent considering it's not your first language. I wish I could do anywhere near as well with Spanish, French or Thai. But I'm afraid you lost me on this one. No one should be in fear of giving a comment.
I think what you're saying with this: "...a bit as if in fear giving in or loosing territory, insisting" is that I have very positive views. Yes, I have, and I won't make excuses for that. I've been doing serious photography for 66 years in the United States and in Asia. I've been selling prints out of galleries for many years. I have a collection of books of photographs that covers a wall in my house, and I'm into one or the other of them most evenings. I'm familiar with the history of photography. I teach photography at a retirement community in Florida during the winter, and lecture on photography to other groups from time to time by invitation. Once a year I judge a photo show by the photographers in an art league in central Florida. That's the background from which I make my judgments.
None of this means I'm always right. I make mistakes just like anyone else does, and when I'm offering an opinion, it's just that -- an opinion. Think about the embarrassing oversight John (Button) caught me in on failing to convert my pictures to sRGB before I post them here. That's an absolutely fundamental thing I should have caught right off.
Remember, the main point I've been making in this discussion is that the poster who receives criticism is the one who has to decide the value of the criticism. It's just as reasonable to reject my criticism as it is to reject someone else's criticism. But though you, or anyone else may reject the idea, as far as I'm concerned the real test of a photographer is his photographs -- not what he says about them or about himself.
To me the real problem is that there are people who are excellent artists but nearly incoherent writers, and there are people who are eloquent writers who can't make a decent photograph to save their souls. When I'm looking at criticism I'd really like to know how well the words fit the competence of the writer. Sometimes I'm surprised, but usually not.
popnfresh
Jul 7 2009, 11:38 AM
Criticism, like photography, can be an art in itself. For me, the number one rule when critiquing someone's work is to be polite. And if you can't be polite, don't critique. That doesn't mean that you can't say you don't like a picture. But if I don't care for a picture, I don't just say I don't like it--I say what doesn't work for me and offer suggestions on how I might have done it differently. But as others have said, it's just an opinion, not gospel. The number 2 rule is don't pontificate. No one has been appointed God in these forums and no one needs to be lectured by anyone else. I prefer to think of this as a forum where we can all learn from each other.
Praise, on the other hand, is always a good thing--especially when you really mean it. I praise effort when I think it deserves praise. I critique when I think I have something constructive to offer. Sometimes, a picture gets some of both.
User Critiques is by far my favorite forum here. Even when I'm not participating in it, I'm perusing it. It's really exciting when you see someone who's been posting for a while really start to show improvement as a photographer.
That's my two cents.
Rob C
Jul 7 2009, 12:26 PM
I read this section on and off - seldom post. The reason? I simply donīt believe criticism - or critique, if you prefer - has a legitimate part to play in the life of a photographer or painter or, for that matter, musician.
In my mind, these are artistic endeavours that belong to the artist. To say that something would have been better if only... is, ultimately, only to say what the critic might or might not have done in the same circumstances and worth nothing in real terms.
I learned early on that one of the worst mistakes I could ever have made was to have paid attention to two critics, the first a head honcho in a camera club Iīd joined simply to get using a darkroom (I was trying to get darkroom experience): there was a "competition" where one had to make and show a print on any subject at all. I did a still-life of a mandolin, an old Chianti bottle and a third item Iīve forgotten. The remark? Far too commerical - not good. As I already knew where I wanted my life to go, I was amused if pissed off. The second event was in night school where on mentioning that I was a fan of David Bailey, the "lecturer", who worked in a local studio, informed the class at large that if he shot like Bailey heīd quit photography. Yes, right. I quit the night schol instead and never looked back, Bailey or not. Oh, that studio eventually folded...
So in my mind, I think it an error to subject oneīs work to the opinions of another. Whether he likes your work or not is HIS problem; itīs your work and if you like it, thatīs good enough. As Russ has pointed out - I think it was he - there are too many people around in positions of influence who simply donīt have the ability to practise what they preach which, again for me, makes their opinions worthless if not downright dangerous. The painter paradigm suits beautifully, too.
If you are new, then fine, everybody is at some stage. My suggestions for self-improvement? Simple: look at a lot of work in magazines, browse through libraries and bookshops, cruise the web of an evening, form your own private list of heroes but never, ever ask somebody else anything about aesthetics. Ask about technical matters for sure - saves a lot of time and the LuLa is an excellent resource where I have picked up a lot of information and a lot of direct help. The same is true for small, private groups. But what you put INTO your image is your business.
Never forget that the world is as full of wannabe gurus as it is of wannabe photographers. Hell, you can make a career of both!
Rob C
QUOTE (Rob C @ Jul 7 2009, 12:26 PM)

...look at a lot of work in magazines, browse through libraries and bookshops, cruise the web of an evening, form your own private list of heroes...
Rob C
Yes! This above all! This also is the way you learn to compose properly on the camera.
dalethorn
Jul 7 2009, 02:53 PM
QUOTE (RSL @ Jul 7 2009, 11:15 AM)

Yes! This above all! This also is the way you learn to compose properly on the camera.
So what do you do when you're perusing those high-fashion mags and the models are walking at a 30 degree angle to the floor? I've always wondered why they do that (the composition, not the model).
On another note, Nat'l Geog. is putting a new magazine in the stores, title is something akin to "photos by you" - photos submitted to NG by readers. Now this would be really cool, except it's $11 u.s. and rather tiny. And there are millions of websites. Which to choose? That's why I like this forum - instead of skimming the canned sites, here you can observe the struggling photographers first-hand, and even participate.
One of the things that makes finding material difficult is identifying a so-called genre, where I can get a much better hit rate so to speak, so I'm not spending a lot of time looking through images I have no interest in. I haven't dug into that issue deeply in photography, but I have in the field of music. And in pop music, to this very day, there is no acceptance or even acknowledgement of my favorite genre in any media I can find. That's why the original Napster was so great - you could find a tune you liked, then expand that user's list, listen to other tunes and see which other users had them, then expand their lists, and so on.
To do this in photography, you would need shared images, or shared lists of URL's that link directly to specific images, so that you could quickly do as I described above with the old Napster program. That means when I see an image I like on Joe's site, I check the other images, and for the ones I also like, I can look those actual images up on other people's sites, then expand their lists, etc.
Chances of that ever happening? No, we seem to be living in a closed-in paranoid world where there's a deathly fear of someone stealing our stuff. Watermarks should have alleviated that, but apparently haven't.
John R
Jul 7 2009, 09:23 PM
Well, I have a suggestion. Rather than submit images for critique, why not create a forum for simple exposition of images where people can leave comments if they wish. Limit the images to three per week per person so as not to inundate the forum. The Critique forum will remain and be separate and the new forum will be for people to share their images with other photo enthusiasts. How about that? I do think the Critique forum is overly critical, as if we are all trying to produce top professional quality images. Most people just learn as we go and do the best we can while enjoying photography and sharing with others.
JMR
shutterpup
Jul 7 2009, 09:36 PM
QUOTE (John R @ Jul 7 2009, 09:23 PM)

Well, I have a suggestion. Rather than submit images for critique, why not create a forum for simple exposition of images where people can leave comments if they wish. Limit the images to three per week per person so as not to inundate the forum. The Critique forum will remain and be separate and the new forum will be for people to share their images with other photo enthusiasts. How about that? I do think the Critique forum is overly critical, as if we are all trying to produce top professional quality images. Most people just learn as we go and do the best we can while enjoying photography and sharing with others.
JMR
If you're going to do that, just join a Flickr group. Just my .02
I personally like the style of the Critique forum here. I can at least get honest feedback and information I wouldn't get in a forum that is similar to Flickr.
button
Jul 7 2009, 10:23 PM
QUOTE (John R @ Jul 7 2009, 09:23 PM)

as if we are all trying to produce top professional quality images.
JMR
I thought that was the idea...
John
byork
Jul 7 2009, 10:28 PM
QUOTE (shutterpup @ Jul 8 2009, 03:36 AM)

If you're going to do that, just join a Flickr group. Just my .02
I personally like the style of the Critique forum here. I can at least get honest feedback and information I wouldn't get in a forum that is similar to Flickr.
I agree....and I for one would be a very happy man if anybody ever said my work was professional quality.
kikashi
Jul 8 2009, 02:35 AM
QUOTE (shutterpup @ Jul 8 2009, 03:36 AM)

I personally like the style of the Critique forum here. I can at least get honest feedback and information I wouldn't get in a forum that is similar to Flickr.
I agree entirely. I don't want uncritical adulation: I want someone to tell me why he (or she) thinks that a shot I consider good doesn't work for him and I'd like him to suggest how it might be improved. I won't necessarily accept all that he says: I'll look at his other posts and his other critiques, and I'll look at any of his photos that I can easily find and then form my own view of his artistic tastes and abilities and how much credence I should give to his views.
Being told that a shot is good, while gratifying, doesn't help my development as a photographer. Being told why it is good, though, helps enormously. When Alain Briot explained why one of the shots I'd posted here worked (for him, at least), I learned something very useful and my eye became a little more trained.
That, for me, is what critique is about.
Jeremy
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