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stamper
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Taken last week on the shores of Loch Faskally, Perthshire, Scotland. It will probably be another week or two before the colours are at their best?
John R
The quality of light is amazing, like a rainbow light coming through. I find the crop too tight rendering the mountain too central; it cuts off the sweep and line of the mountain on the right side, where the slope practically begs for more exposure. I guess one could have gone to the left also, but the right is more suggestive in this crop.

JMR
stamper

Thanks for the feedback. I have other images taken in a wider view that I will look at.
Chairman Bill
Do you have any photies taken in autumn? wink.gif
Dick Roadnight
QUOTE (John R @ Oct 12 2009, 01:43 PM) *
The quality of light is amazing, like a rainbow light coming through. I find the crop too tight rendering the mountain too central; it cuts off the sweep and line of the mountain on the right side, where the slope practically begs for more exposure. I guess one could have gone to the left also, but the right is more suggestive in this crop.

JMR

I see very few landscapes that I do not think would be improved by cropping/using a longer lens... I did not immediately think so with this, but you could try a longer lens and a vertical format - I do like vertical landscapes.
papa v2.0
hi stamper

which part of bonnie Scotland do you hail from?

nice pic know the area quite well, although the last time i was that way it was on the london train.
stamper
QUOTE (Chairman Bill @ Oct 12 2009, 04:43 PM) *
Do you have any photies taken in autumn? wink.gif


October in Scotland is in Autumn rolleyes.gif
stamper
QUOTE (papa v2.0 @ Oct 12 2009, 08:34 PM) *
hi stamper

which part of bonnie Scotland do you hail from?

nice pic know the area quite well, although the last time i was that way it was on the london train.


Dumbarton near Glasgow. Last Thursday I done a tour of Loch Faskally and I am planning another trip next week hopefully?
stamper
Another image taken at around the same time.

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I am not sure if including the house is beneficial to the image, hence the reason for the original image being a tighter crop?


Ed B
I prefer number 2; the sky is better, the autumn colours show better because there are more trees, and the house plus the wider angle give a better sense of scale.


Ed
papa v2.0
hi

Im further up north in sunny Inverness.
Prefer the one with the house.

my son live in gourock so im down that way from time to time.

maybe catch up sometime for a beer.
jasonrandolph
I agree with Ed. Both are good, but the wider view of the second image is much better. Looks like a beautiful place!
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